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+2Night's Sweet Caress missime66 6 posters |
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missime66
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-10-11
Age : 44
Location : Canada!
|  Subject: Heaven - A Poem Mon 12 Oct 2009, 11:23 pm | |
| The red-orange sky fades into abyss
The waves trickling by my toes
A warm breeze caressing my skin
I close my eyes, feel love, feel life
I am limitless, I am close to God
I am there, I am in my Heaven | |
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Night's Sweet Caress
Posts : 46
Join date : 2009-10-13
Age : 61
Location : North Carolina
| | Subject: Re: Heaven - A Poem Thu 15 Oct 2009, 7:37 pm | |
| This very good, do you have any more, missime66?  | |
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Cupid's Crooked Arrow
Posts : 42
Join date : 2009-10-13
Age : 32
Location : North Carolina
| | Subject: Re: Heaven - A Poem Thu 15 Oct 2009, 7:51 pm | |
| - missime66 wrote:
- The red-orange sky fades into abyss
The waves trickling by my toes
A warm breeze caressing my skin
I close my eyes, feel love, feel life
I am limitless, I am close to God
I am there, I am in my Heaven Missime66.........You have a wonderful gift. Such a lovely poem. Do you write poetry often? | |
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missime66
Posts : 16
Join date : 2009-10-11
Age : 44
Location : Canada!
| | Subject: Re: Heaven - A Poem Thu 15 Oct 2009, 9:06 pm | |
| Some of my other work is posted on IFF. I may bring some over. I am very sporadic with writing. VITD has encouraged me to write more and I plan on posting more stuff! Stay tuned! Thank you everyone!  | |
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mcpheever63
Posts : 9
Join date : 2009-10-16
Age : 59
Location : Pennsylvania
| | Subject: Re: Heaven - A Poem Fri 16 Oct 2009, 4:44 pm | |
| That was beautiful. I love it. | |
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Voice In The Darkness
Admin
Posts : 88
Join date : 2009-10-07
Age : 56
Location : California
| | Subject: Re: Heaven - A Poem Sat 17 Oct 2009, 10:24 pm | |
| You are indeed a poet. This is a sweet little treat for the imagination, nice job! You have a talent of writing something; expressing yourself with the least words said, yet leaving an impressive impact. You brought this piece of poetry to such a high level of emotional reality that it drew me in completely. Very impressive indeed. | |
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Avenging Angel
Posts : 22
Join date : 2009-10-15
Age : 35
Location : Alabama
| | Subject: Re: Heaven - A Poem Sun 18 Oct 2009, 12:12 pm | |
| Can we just agree with the other posters and say that you are an exceptional talent.  | |
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Cupid's Crooked Arrow
Posts : 42
Join date : 2009-10-13
Age : 32
Location : North Carolina
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