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missime66

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PostSubject: Heaven - A Poem   Mon 12 Oct 2009, 11:23 pm

The red-orange sky fades into abyss
The waves trickling by my toes
A warm breeze caressing my skin
I close my eyes, feel love, feel life
I am limitless, I am close to God
I am there, I am in my Heaven
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PostSubject: Re: Heaven - A Poem   Thu 15 Oct 2009, 7:37 pm

This very good, do you have any more, missime66? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Heaven - A Poem   Thu 15 Oct 2009, 7:51 pm

missime66 wrote:
The red-orange sky fades into abyss
The waves trickling by my toes
A warm breeze caressing my skin
I close my eyes, feel love, feel life
I am limitless, I am close to God
I am there, I am in my Heaven






Missime66.........You have a wonderful gift. Such a lovely poem. Do you write poetry often?
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PostSubject: Re: Heaven - A Poem   Thu 15 Oct 2009, 9:06 pm

Some of my other work is posted on IFF. I may bring some over.

I am very sporadic with writing. VITD has encouraged me to write more and I plan on posting more stuff!

Stay tuned!

Thank you everyone!

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PostSubject: Re: Heaven - A Poem   Fri 16 Oct 2009, 4:44 pm

That was beautiful. I love it. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Heaven - A Poem   Sat 17 Oct 2009, 10:24 pm

You are indeed a poet. This is a sweet little treat for the imagination, nice job! You have a talent of writing something; expressing yourself with the least words said, yet leaving an impressive impact. You brought this piece of poetry to such a high level of emotional reality that it drew me in completely. Very impressive indeed.
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PostSubject: Re: Heaven - A Poem   Sun 18 Oct 2009, 12:12 pm

Can we just agree with the other posters and say that you are an exceptional talent. I love you
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PostSubject: Re: Heaven - A Poem   Sun 18 Oct 2009, 2:45 pm

Avenging Angel wrote:
Can we just agree with the other posters and say that you are an exceptional talent. I love you

I second this! I love you
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